Assessor Name: Leighton Potter
Feedback: The animation works well in following the rule of anticipation. The way the lamp moves just before it jumps gives a clear indication that its going to jump and works well. The timing of the animation works at first however just before the lamp hits the ground, it floats for a second and doesn’t feel natural or organic; Also when the lamp lands, there is little to movement from the neck of the lamp, upwards and gives the lamp an un-organic feel. You could improve this animation by giving the top of the lamp a little more attention during the jump motion and working on a more organic landing.
Improvement:
<p><a href=”https://vimeo.com/242087672″>Lamp V2</a> from <a href=”https://vimeo.com/user72252699″>Matthew Dickson</a> on <a href=”https://vimeo.com”>Vimeo</a>.</p>
I took the feedback that I was given on board and improved the landing of my Lamp to make it have more of a bounce on impact with the floor. I think it looks much better than before because it looks much more realistic to the laws of physics.
